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With Hometown behind them, the 4 heroes set out on their adventure to discover the truth about the Titans. The Kaosu Path was a winding trail, meandering in and out like a wild river, claiming those who could not fight it. It was renowned for it's tales of merchants that wander in and never wander out. It was the sort of place that children were told of in bedtime stories, to stop them from wandering off. A thick sheet of mist hung in  the air like a devilish wedding veil, wrapping the exits like a giant plastic bag. Merely walking through gave a claustrophobic feel, like you were never safe...

''Are you sure that there's no other way to Kaosu town?'', asked Matt worriedly. ''Relax, will you? There's nothing in here you haven't seen before''. Unfortunately, the one who had spoken these words, Harry, was often hideously wrong in his judgement. Because out of a nearby tree, came something that made Alex jump like an anti-gravity pogo-stick. It had 4 arms, 2 blood red eyes a third the size of it's head, and sharp, tearing claws... It ran at the 4 heroes, fangs beared, ready to strike...ready to kill...

BATTLE START!!!

Enemy: Barklaw

''Alex, do something!'', screamed the half-petrified Matt. ''Well, it lives in a tree, so it must be weak against...FIRE!''.

Alex: Fireball Attack!

The Barklaw was having none of it. It leapt at it's aggressor, all fangs shown, claws out ready to slice... It was coming down like a cannonball...And it was aiming right at Alex's face...

To be continued...
©2005-2009 ~MegaPhoenix
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2 parts in one day?
It took me nearly a month to do part 2!

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The format in which you're writing these is very interesting.

I just read Parts 1-3 in one go and it gives me the sense of an RPG written in a mildly Robert Jordan-esque fashion. Not entirely sure if that was your intent or not but it at least moderately interests me (I'm not extremely into Robert Jordan but I also thoroughly enjoy him when I sit down and really set my mind to it).

At any rate, keep up the good work :thumbsup:
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He he... Like it Alex... Dont 4get me :D

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